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My passion
I want to talk about my passion.
I love horses, i'm a rider.
I'm still a beginner because i practise it since 2009.
When i'm riding, i forget everything... It's magic !
I don't have my own horse, but i would have one later, when i won't be at school anymore...
Some people say that horse-riding isn't a sport, but it is !
They don't know what they are talking about...
It's true that the horse does a lot, but the rider too !
All of it to say that i love horse-riding, and i couldn't live without it, i wouldn't.
This is what that enjoy my life.
:) Thanks to the ones that would correct it, or give their opinion :)

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- I want to talk about my passion.
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- I love horses, i'm a rider.
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- I'm still a beginner because i practise it since 2009.
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- When i'm riding, i forget everything... It's magic !
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- I don't have my own horse, but i would have one later, when i won't be at school anymore...
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- Some people say that horse-riding isn't a sport, but it is !
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- They don't know what they are talking about...
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- It's true that the horse does a lot, but the rider too !
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- All of it to say that i love horse-riding, and i couldn't live without it, i wouldn't.
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- This is what that enjoy my life.
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- :) Thanks to the ones that would correct it, or give their opinion :)
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