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  • My passion

  • I want to talk about my passion.
  • I love horses, i'm a rider.
  • I'm still a beginner because i practise it since 2009.
  • When i'm riding, i forget everything... It's magic !
  • I don't have my own horse, but i would have one later, when i won't be at school anymore...
  • Some people say that horse-riding isn't a sport, but it is !
  • They don't know what they are talking about...
  • It's true that the horse does a lot, but the rider too !
  • All of it to say that i love horse-riding, and i couldn't live without it, i wouldn't.
  • This is what that enjoy my life.
  • :) Thanks to the ones that would correct it, or give their opinion :)

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