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My experience in Disneyland Paris!
Hello everybody!
I would like to tell you my experience in Disneyland Paris!
I've been there for 6 months and it was great, I was a Cast Member.
As you know (maybe) in this year there is the celebration for 20th Anniversary of Disneyland Paris!
They have prepared a fantastic show, called Disney Dreams and I suggest you to have a look for this particular show!
It was really great 'cause I met a lot of people, and I have had a lot of fun!
I worked as shopping assistant and I liked it!
The only negative part was the hour planning!
Too hard for me!
I've finished working very often at 2 'o clock...
Well... it was great as well!

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- Hello everybody!
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- I would like to tell you my experience in Disneyland Paris!
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- I've been there for 6 months and it was great, I was a Cast Member.
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- As you know (maybe) in this year there is the celebration for 20th Anniversary of Disneyland Paris!
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- They have prepared a fantastic show, called Disney Dreams and I suggest you to have a look for this particular show!
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- It was really great 'cause I met a lot of people, and I have had a lot of fun!
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- I worked as shopping assistant and I liked it!
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- The only negative part was the hour planning!
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- Too hard for me!
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- I've finished working very often at 2 'o clock...
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- Well... it was great as well!
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