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  • My experience in Disneyland Paris!

  • Hello everybody!
  • I would like to tell you my experience in Disneyland Paris!
  • I've been there for 6 months and it was great, I was a Cast Member.
  • As you know (maybe) in this year there is the celebration for 20th Anniversary of Disneyland Paris!
  • They have prepared a fantastic show, called Disney Dreams and I suggest you to have a look for this particular show!
  • It was really great 'cause I met a lot of people, and I have had a lot of fun!
  • I worked as shopping assistant and I liked it!
  • The only negative part was the hour planning!
  • Too hard for me!
  • I've finished working very often at 2 'o clock...
  • Well... it was great as well!

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