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English and me.
So..
I'm Laura, and my English is very bad...
I would be better.
Have more vocabulary and speak English freely.
At school, teacher are totaly desappointed ( luckily you don't hear my English accent !)

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- So..
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- I'm Laura, and my English is very bad...
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- I would be better.
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- Have more vocabulary and speak English freely.
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- At school, teacher are totaly desappointed ( luckily you don't hear my English accent !)
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