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English and me.
So..
I'm Laura, and my English is very bad...
I would be better.
Have more vocabulary and speak English freely.
At school, teacher are totaly desappointed ( luckily you don't hear my English accent !)

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- English and me.
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句子 1
- So..
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句子 2
- I'm Laura, and my English is very bad...
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I would be better.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Have more vocabulary and speak English freely.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- At school, teacher are totaly desappointed ( luckily you don't hear my English accent !)
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5