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Coffiee's day!
Today it has been a very hard day.
It's monday... and here it's so hot!
Finally it's arrived summer in my country but walking under the sun it's not very nice!
Also working with 28° it's difficult!
So I have taken many coffee to stay awake.
I have taken six coffee....nevertheless I risked to sleep on the desk in my office!

TalbatJune 2013투표하세요!
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- Coffiee's day!
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- Today it has been a very hard day.
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- It's monday... and here it's so hot!
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- Finally it's arrived summer in my country but walking under the sun it's not very nice!
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- Also working with 28° it's difficult!
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- So I have taken many coffee to stay awake.
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- I have taken six coffee....nevertheless I risked to sleep on the desk in my office!
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6