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Coffiee's day!
Today it has been a very hard day.
It's monday... and here it's so hot!
Finally it's arrived summer in my country but walking under the sun it's not very nice!
Also working with 28° it's difficult!
So I have taken many coffee to stay awake.
I have taken six coffee....nevertheless I risked to sleep on the desk in my office!

TalbatJune 2013Bầu chọn ngay!
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- Coffiee's day!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
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câu 1
- Today it has been a very hard day.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
câu 2
- It's monday... and here it's so hot!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
câu 3
- Finally it's arrived summer in my country but walking under the sun it's not very nice!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
câu 4
- Also working with 28° it's difficult!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
câu 5
- So I have taken many coffee to stay awake.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
câu 6
- I have taken six coffee....nevertheless I risked to sleep on the desk in my office!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6