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My evolution to improve my English
Since one month, I work my English everyday, I would like to speak English fluently for my studies and my future professional life.
I love the English culture.
After to have English language, I will learn the portuguese language or the russian language.
Today, is my first day on this internet site very interesting.
Thank you for all people who will correct me.

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- Since one month, I work my English everyday, I would like to speak English fluently for my studies and my future professional life.
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- I love the English culture.
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- After to have English language, I will learn the portuguese language or the russian language.
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- Today, is my first day on this internet site very interesting.
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- Thank you for all people who will correct me.
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