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My evolution to improve my English
Since one month, I work my English everyday, I would like to speak English fluently for my studies and my future professional life.
I love the English culture.
After to have English language, I will learn the portuguese language or the russian language.
Today, is my first day on this internet site very interesting.
Thank you for all people who will correct me.

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- My evolution to improve my English
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- Since one month, I work my English everyday, I would like to speak English fluently for my studies and my future professional life.
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문장 2
- I love the English culture.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- After to have English language, I will learn the portuguese language or the russian language.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- Today, is my first day on this internet site very interesting.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- Thank you for all people who will correct me.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5