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New York
I would like to spend some time in New York.
According an article there are people of 148 countries who live over there.
It's amazing to joint so many multicultural people in an area.
I would like to barter my life for a short time as a stowaway to be in New York.
I would go in all the neighborhoods one after the other.
I wouldn't go out on a limb, I would just live as the spitting image of a foreign family even I don't speak their language.
I would babble with my italians, chineses, jewish, africans and the others neighbours.
I would discover their food, their way of life.
I think it would be a great adventure.

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- I would like to spend some time in New York.
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- According an article there are people of 148 countries who live over there.
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- It's amazing to joint so many multicultural people in an area.
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- I would like to barter my life for a short time as a stowaway to be in New York.
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- I would go in all the neighborhoods one after the other.
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- I wouldn't go out on a limb, I would just live as the spitting image of a foreign family even I don't speak their language.
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- I would babble with my italians, chineses, jewish, africans and the others neighbours.
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- I would discover their food, their way of life.
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- I think it would be a great adventure.
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