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New York
I would like to spend some time in New York.
According an article there are people of 148 countries who live over there.
It's amazing to joint so many multicultural people in an area.
I would like to barter my life for a short time as a stowaway to be in New York.
I would go in all the neighborhoods one after the other.
I wouldn't go out on a limb, I would just live as the spitting image of a foreign family even I don't speak their language.
I would babble with my italians, chineses, jewish, africans and the others neighbours.
I would discover their food, their way of life.
I think it would be a great adventure.

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- New York
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句子 1
- I would like to spend some time in New York.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- According an article there are people of 148 countries who live over there.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- It's amazing to joint so many multicultural people in an area.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I would like to barter my life for a short time as a stowaway to be in New York.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- I would go in all the neighborhoods one after the other.
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句子 6
- I wouldn't go out on a limb, I would just live as the spitting image of a foreign family even I don't speak their language.
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句子 7
- I would babble with my italians, chineses, jewish, africans and the others neighbours.
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句子 8
- I would discover their food, their way of life.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8
句子 9
- I think it would be a great adventure.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9