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Hello guys
My name is Lucas , I live in Brazil, I'm from sao paulo.
I really want to learn the language because English is the most spoken language in the world, I know I have to study hard to be able to speak fluently and write correct.
Help me correcting my mistakes please , Thanks .

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- Hello guys
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문장 1
- My name is Lucas , I live in Brazil, I'm from sao paulo.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
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- I really want to learn the language because English is the most spoken language in the world, I know I have to study hard to be able to speak fluently and write correct.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
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- Help me correcting my mistakes please , Thanks .
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3