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Teks daripada LUCASWESLEY - English

Hello guys
My name is Lucas , I live in Brazil, I'm from sao paulo.
I really want to learn the language because English is the most spoken language in the world, I know I have to study hard to be able to speak fluently and write correct.
Help me correcting my mistakes please , Thanks .

Title
- Hello guys
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- My name is Lucas , I live in Brazil, I'm from sao paulo.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- I really want to learn the language because English is the most spoken language in the world, I know I have to study hard to be able to speak fluently and write correct.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- Help me correcting my mistakes please , Thanks .
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3