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  • Arkansas: 12 year-old guy finds a diamond of 5 carats

  • Ten minutes occurred.
  • “I went to the park for not more than 10 minutes and I was looking around.
  • I saw it there, exactly on the land.
  • It seemed a glass bead and it was very smooth.” In this manner, Micheal Dettlaff explained to ABC News how he found a diamond of 5,16 carats in the Crater of Diamonds State Park, in Arkansas, the unique deposit of diamonds in the whole world opened to public, where everybody is allowed to go and with a little bit of fortune (very much) to find the own rock.
  • IN ARKANSAS – The rock found by the 12 year-old guy from North Carolina, who with the family was visiting the park, has a value of $15,000 (like €11,000).
  • In the deposit, which dates back to 100 millions of years ago, is closer to Murfreesboro, the first diamonds were found in 1906.
  • After several series of authorisations of extractions finished badly, the deposit has become a park in Arkansas since 1972.
  • According to statistics, the diamonds which have been found are 75,000 till now, the most important in 1924, when it was discovered a rock of 40 carats.

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    • It seemed a glass bead and it was very smooth.” In this manner, Micheal Dettlaff explained to ABC News how he found a diamond of 5,16 carats in the Crater of Diamonds State Park, in Arkansas, the unique deposit of diamonds in the whole world opened to public, where everybody is allowed to go and with a little bit of fortune (very much) to find the own rock.
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    • IN ARKANSAS – The rock found by the 12 year-old guy from North Carolina, who with the family was visiting the park, has a value of $15,000 (like €11,000).
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    • In the deposit, which dates back to 100 millions of years ago, is closer to Murfreesboro, the first diamonds were found in 1906.
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    • After several series of authorisations of extractions finished badly, the deposit has become a park in Arkansas since 1972.
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    • According to statistics, the diamonds which have been found are 75,000 till now, the most important in 1924, when it was discovered a rock of 40 carats.
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