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About myself
Good evening everyone!
My name is Viktoria.
I'm 19 years old.
I'm from Kazakhstan, Almaty city.
I rent a flat, near my work, and live there with my boyfriend.
I work at "Tabys Consulting" company, which render accounting service for other companies in our city.
I'm an accountant there.
I consult about 20 companies myself, and I like my job.
I want to learn English language, and leave the country in future.

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- Good evening everyone!
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- My name is Viktoria.
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- I'm 19 years old.
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- I'm from Kazakhstan, Almaty city.
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- I rent a flat, near my work, and live there with my boyfriend.
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- I work at "Tabys Consulting" company, which render accounting service for other companies in our city.
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- I'm an accountant there.
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- I consult about 20 companies myself, and I like my job.
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- I want to learn English language, and leave the country in future.
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