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  • About myself

  • Good evening everyone!
  • My name is Viktoria.
  • I'm 19 years old.
  • I'm from Kazakhstan, Almaty city.
  • I rent a flat, near my work, and live there with my boyfriend.
  • I work at "Tabys Consulting" company, which render accounting service for other companies in our city.
  • I'm an accountant there.
  • I consult about 20 companies myself, and I like my job.
  • I want to learn English language, and leave the country in future.

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