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Text from Thaline - English

  • About me

  • I'm brazilian and I live with my parents in São Paulo.
  • Recently I'll be searching new people to practice this language because I always goes shy in speak English with other people, especially exchange people.
  • Well, I'm here, fighting against my shy and waiting to meet new friends irrespective of the difficulty.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English