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Thaline (으)로 부터 도착한메세지 - English

About me
I'm brazilian and I live with my parents in São Paulo.
Recently I'll be searching new people to practice this language because I always goes shy in speak English with other people, especially exchange people.
Well, I'm here, fighting against my shy and waiting to meet new friends irrespective of the difficulty.

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- I'm brazilian and I live with my parents in São Paulo.
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- Recently I'll be searching new people to practice this language because I always goes shy in speak English with other people, especially exchange people.
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- Well, I'm here, fighting against my shy and waiting to meet new friends irrespective of the difficulty.
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