Corrections

HELP TO CORRECT NOW!Uncorrected

Text from LenineDeMoura - English

My Birthday
Yesterday was my birthday.
I really enjoy my birthdays.
Usually, is a day full of fun and joy, with my closest friends and family.
Yesterday was a little bit different.
It was my first birthday since I moved out from my parents house.
Besides, it was my first birthday in five years that i didn't meet my bestfriend.
Although it was a very different day to me, I really liked it.
I had lunch out with a new friend from college and dinner with my older brother.
Today I'm nineteen, and I can say to you guys, I have never been so happy.
Thank you for helping me.
I will try to write more frequently.

Title
- My Birthday
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Title
Sentence 1
- Yesterday was my birthday.
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 1
Sentence 2
- I really enjoy my birthdays.
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 2
Sentence 3
- Usually, is a day full of fun and joy, with my closest friends and family.
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 3
Sentence 4
- Yesterday was a little bit different.
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4
Sentence 5
- It was my first birthday since I moved out from my parents house.
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5
Sentence 6
- Besides, it was my first birthday in five years that i didn't meet my bestfriend.
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6
Sentence 7
- Although it was a very different day to me, I really liked it.
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7
Sentence 8
- I had lunch out with a new friend from college and dinner with my older brother.
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 8
Sentence 9
- Today I'm nineteen, and I can say to you guys, I have never been so happy.
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 9
Sentence 10
- Thank you for helping me.
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 10
Sentence 11
- I will try to write more frequently.
  Vote now!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 11