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My Birthday
Yesterday was my birthday.
I really enjoy my birthdays.
Usually, is a day full of fun and joy, with my closest friends and family.
Yesterday was a little bit different.
It was my first birthday since I moved out from my parents house.
Besides, it was my first birthday in five years that i didn't meet my bestfriend.
Although it was a very different day to me, I really liked it.
I had lunch out with a new friend from college and dinner with my older brother.
Today I'm nineteen, and I can say to you guys, I have never been so happy.
Thank you for helping me.
I will try to write more frequently.

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- My Birthday
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句子 1
- Yesterday was my birthday.
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句子 2
- I really enjoy my birthdays.
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句子 3
- Usually, is a day full of fun and joy, with my closest friends and family.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Yesterday was a little bit different.
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句子 5
- It was my first birthday since I moved out from my parents house.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- Besides, it was my first birthday in five years that i didn't meet my bestfriend.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- Although it was a very different day to me, I really liked it.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- I had lunch out with a new friend from college and dinner with my older brother.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8
句子 9
- Today I'm nineteen, and I can say to you guys, I have never been so happy.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9
句子 10
- Thank you for helping me.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 10
句子 11
- I will try to write more frequently.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 11