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my opinion about the story.
Recently, i read the first part of story that is called "One Day" ,by David Nickolls .
I'm fond of this kind of stories and i spend an enjoyable time.I'm interested what will be next.

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- Recently, i read the first part of story that is called "One Day" ,by David Nickolls .
  투표하세요!
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- I'm fond of this kind of stories and i spend an enjoyable time.I'm interested what will be next.
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