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my opinion about the story.
Recently, i read the first part of story that is called "One Day" ,by David Nickolls .
I'm fond of this kind of stories and i spend an enjoyable time.I'm interested what will be next.

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- my opinion about the story.
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句子 1
- Recently, i read the first part of story that is called "One Day" ,by David Nickolls .
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I'm fond of this kind of stories and i spend an enjoyable time.I'm interested what will be next.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2