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  • Two Diagrams

  • The 2 diagrams illustrate the manufacture of concrete for construction purposes including the cement production and different equipment involving into this process.
  • Cement production consist of several stages and involves different equipment.
  • Firstly, limestone and clay go through the Crusher in order to receive a powder of these two compounds.
  • Then, the powder is put into the Mixer and after that, mixed powder enters to the Rotating Heater which is heated from the bottom.
  • From there, dried powder is put on the Grinder and finally, cement is packed in the bags.
  • In comparison, concrete production includes only one stage – mixing up Cement, Water, Sand and Gravel in particular proportion by the Concrete Mixer.
  • To sum up, the concrete production is a simple process which is impossible without multistage production of the cement as the main compound of the concrete.

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    • The 2 diagrams illustrate the manufacture of concrete for construction purposes including the cement production and different equipment involving into this process.
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    • Then, the powder is put into the Mixer and after that, mixed powder enters to the Rotating Heater which is heated from the bottom.
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    • In comparison, concrete production includes only one stage – mixing up Cement, Water, Sand and Gravel in particular proportion by the Concrete Mixer.
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    • To sum up, the concrete production is a simple process which is impossible without multistage production of the cement as the main compound of the concrete.
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