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Text from HappyHipo - English

  • Increasing the Price of Petrol is one way to solve pollution Pr

  • Nowadays, the air contamination problem which is linked with the increasing traffic in urban areas is the main stumbling block between cities` Government and cars` owners.
  • In order to avoid the serious damage to the world environment this problem should be solved immediately.
  • And the increase of petrol prices could be one of the useful steps to prevent the growing traffic with its poison emissions.
  • The economic stabilization brought us the opportunity of getting private credits which play a significant role in the growth of cars number.
  • The overwhelming majority of middle-class families buy cars in credit which means that paying off credit is the biggest point of householders` budgets.
  • Hence, the increase of petrol prices could be unaffordable for the wide group of people.
  • Additionally, the Authorities of cities should consider some other measures of the traffic decrease.
  • For instance, the rise of taxes on engine volume and tolls on the use of roads could reduce growing traffic and, consequently, the air pollution.
  • Furthermore, the Governments could also make a priceless contribution to the environment protection by substitute petrol public transport for the electrical, such as electro buses or trolleybuses.
  • In conclusion, the air pollution is a significant problem which should be solved by the interaction of citizens and Governments.
  • In my opinion, citizens shouldn`t argue with such kind of rude measures in order to solve our global problem.

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    • Nowadays, the air contamination problem which is linked with the increasing traffic in urban areas is the main stumbling block between cities` Government and cars` owners.
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    • And the increase of petrol prices could be one of the useful steps to prevent the growing traffic with its poison emissions.
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    • The economic stabilization brought us the opportunity of getting private credits which play a significant role in the growth of cars number.
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    • The overwhelming majority of middle-class families buy cars in credit which means that paying off credit is the biggest point of householders` budgets.
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    • For instance, the rise of taxes on engine volume and tolls on the use of roads could reduce growing traffic and, consequently, the air pollution.
      Vote now!
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    • Furthermore, the Governments could also make a priceless contribution to the environment protection by substitute petrol public transport for the electrical, such as electro buses or trolleybuses.
      Vote now!
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    • In conclusion, the air pollution is a significant problem which should be solved by the interaction of citizens and Governments.
      Vote now!
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