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Testo da Bouby - English

  • gap year (homework)

  • I would like to take a gap year after high school, before go to college in order to discover the world, others cultures and above all, help people in need to be confronted with reality.
  • I’d like to go to Ethiopia to fetch water or build a well and then, purify water from the well, so Ethiopians could have drinkable water because clean water is scarce over there.
  • We could bring food too and teach people what kind of food is better than the other.
  • But our job wouldn’t be only help them, we would have to show them how they can build a well, purify water, and where they can find food, or how to grow vegetables, because they have to pull themselves together to pull through.
  • On the other hand, it’s not only about help them to find rations, I’d like help them to have an education building schools and training teachers so children might have a better life than their parents.
  • I wouldn’t do this to earn money or get admiration from my family and friends but because I like to feel useful, and see people thankful and happy because of me.
  • An experience like that helps build relationships with people you work with and those for whom you work.
  • It would bring me a lot of knowledge because I think people from developing countries can make us discover a lot of things that we can’t even imagine in developed countries.
  • Moreover it’s a good way to learn a new language and it’s a good thing to put on your CV because that shows that you’re open-minded and that you can work in a team.

PER FAVORE, AIUTA A CORREGGERE OGNI FRASE! - English

  • Titolo
  • Frase 1
    • I would like to take a gap year after high school, before go to college in order to discover the world, others cultures and above all, help people in need to be confronted with reality.
      Vota adesso!
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 1AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 1
  • Frase 2
    • I’d like to go to Ethiopia to fetch water or build a well and then, purify water from the well, so Ethiopians could have drinkable water because clean water is scarce over there.
      Vota adesso!
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 2AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 2
  • Frase 3
  • Frase 4
    • But our job wouldn’t be only help them, we would have to show them how they can build a well, purify water, and where they can find food, or how to grow vegetables, because they have to pull themselves together to pull through.
      Vota adesso!
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 4AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 4
  • Frase 5
    • On the other hand, it’s not only about help them to find rations, I’d like help them to have an education building schools and training teachers so children might have a better life than their parents.
      Vota adesso!
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 5AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 5
  • Frase 6
    • I wouldn’t do this to earn money or get admiration from my family and friends but because I like to feel useful, and see people thankful and happy because of me.
      Vota adesso!
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 6AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 6
  • Frase 7
  • Frase 8
    • It would bring me a lot of knowledge because I think people from developing countries can make us discover a lot of things that we can’t even imagine in developed countries.
      Vota adesso!
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 8AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 8
  • Frase 9
    • Moreover it’s a good way to learn a new language and it’s a good thing to put on your CV because that shows that you’re open-minded and that you can work in a team.
      Vota adesso!
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 9AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 9