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  • English homework.

  • Hello !
  • I have to write a text for school, in English and I would like to know if what I did is good or not, tell me what you think !
  • :) Subject : Would you like to take part in reality TV programme ?
  • Why or why not ?
  • I would not want to take part in a reality TV programme because, to my mind, private life is not everybody’s business and I would not want my private life to be broadcast in the whole world.
  • Moreover, this kind of programme bothers me because I don’t see what is interesting : we only see strangers in their daily life, doing stuff without any interest and I don’t want to be in the spotlight for doing nothing special.
  • I would not want people to know me thanks to a stupid show that would made me famous.
  • Furthermore, I think I would not be happy to see my face everyday on a media coverage and being recognized by everybody would be irritating and bothering and then, I could not just walk in the street quietly because people that took part in reality TV programme became famous and people want to take pictures with them and I think I could not stand it.
  • Well, glory of people who took part is such programme is short-lived and quickly, they become again unknown so reality TV is useless.

AUTA KORJAAMAAN JOKAINEN LAUSE! - English

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    • I have to write a text for school, in English and I would like to know if what I did is good or not, tell me what you think !
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    • I would not want to take part in a reality TV programme because, to my mind, private life is not everybody’s business and I would not want my private life to be broadcast in the whole world.
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    • Moreover, this kind of programme bothers me because I don’t see what is interesting : we only see strangers in their daily life, doing stuff without any interest and I don’t want to be in the spotlight for doing nothing special.
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    • Furthermore, I think I would not be happy to see my face everyday on a media coverage and being recognized by everybody would be irritating and bothering and then, I could not just walk in the street quietly because people that took part in reality TV programme became famous and people want to take pictures with them and I think I could not stand it.
      Äänestä nyt!
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    • Well, glory of people who took part is such programme is short-lived and quickly, they become again unknown so reality TV is useless.
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