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Hello !

I have to write a text for school, in English and I would like to know if what I did is good or not, tell me what you think !

:) Subject : Would you like to take part in reality TV programme ?

Why or why not ?

I would not want to take part in a reality TV programme because, to my mind, private life is not everybody’s business and I would not want my private life to be broadcast in the whole world.

Moreover, this kind of programme bothers me because I don’t see what is interesting : we only see strangers in their daily life, doing stuff without any interest and I don’t want to be in the spotlight for doing nothing special.

I would not want people to know me thanks to a stupid show that would made me famous.

Furthermore, I think I would not be happy to see my face everyday on a media coverage and being recognized by everybody would be irritating and bothering and then, I could not just walk in the street quietly because people that took part in reality TV programme became famous and people want to take pictures with them and I think I could not stand it.

Well, glory of people who took part is such programme is short-lived and quickly, they become again unknown so reality TV is useless.