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POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ TERAZ!Niepoprawione

Text from Fra_fra - English

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  • If people migrate to cities, they become more overcrowded and so always more people will take cars to go to work and as a result traffic congestions will rise sharply.
  • A good idea would be to increase the number of public buses in the first hours of the day.
  • By doing this many people will prefer to use public transportation to go to work and traffic congestions will decrease.
  • People spend too much time watching TV.
  • For example some studies demonstrate that children spend around 5 to 6 hours a day watching tv programs.
  • Consequently they don't have enough time to do their homeworks and to socialize whit their friends.
  • If parents will be more restrictive about use of TV and organize to their children alternative activities then this problem could be easily overcome.
  • This will lead to minor use of tv from children and that will also strenghten the bounds with their parent.
  • The development of tourism often create resentment among local people because tourists do not respect their traditions and their culture.
  • For example some south american tribù don't want that tourists take picture of them because of religion beliefs.
  • The obvious answer is to explain tourists this cultural belief and to control more strictly that they rispect this rule.
  • Furthermore this measure could garantee a better coexistence between tourists and local tribù.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English