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Văn bản từ Fra_fra - English

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  • If people migrate to cities, they become more overcrowded and so always more people will take cars to go to work and as a result traffic congestions will rise sharply.
  • A good idea would be to increase the number of public buses in the first hours of the day.
  • By doing this many people will prefer to use public transportation to go to work and traffic congestions will decrease.
  • People spend too much time watching TV.
  • For example some studies demonstrate that children spend around 5 to 6 hours a day watching tv programs.
  • Consequently they don't have enough time to do their homeworks and to socialize whit their friends.
  • If parents will be more restrictive about use of TV and organize to their children alternative activities then this problem could be easily overcome.
  • This will lead to minor use of tv from children and that will also strenghten the bounds with their parent.
  • The development of tourism often create resentment among local people because tourists do not respect their traditions and their culture.
  • For example some south american tribù don't want that tourists take picture of them because of religion beliefs.
  • The obvious answer is to explain tourists this cultural belief and to control more strictly that they rispect this rule.
  • Furthermore this measure could garantee a better coexistence between tourists and local tribù.

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • If people migrate to cities, they become more overcrowded and so always more people will take cars to go to work and as a result traffic congestions will rise sharply.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
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  • câu 3
    • By doing this many people will prefer to use public transportation to go to work and traffic congestions will decrease.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
  • câu 5
    • For example some studies demonstrate that children spend around 5 to 6 hours a day watching tv programs.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
  • câu 7
    • If parents will be more restrictive about use of TV and organize to their children alternative activities then this problem could be easily overcome.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • This will lead to minor use of tv from children and that will also strenghten the bounds with their parent.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • The development of tourism often create resentment among local people because tourists do not respect their traditions and their culture.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
  • câu 10
    • For example some south american tribù don't want that tourists take picture of them because of religion beliefs.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10
  • câu 11
    • The obvious answer is to explain tourists this cultural belief and to control more strictly that they rispect this rule.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11
  • câu 12