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My winter vacation
On this holiday, I had fun.
At first, we celebrated christmas in my grandma's house.
Now, I'm waiting to the new year!!!
Tomorrow is the last day of 2013 and I'll celebrate it with my family.
I love the countdown to the new year!!!
Is one of the most fantastic days of the year.

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- My winter vacation
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- On this holiday, I had fun.
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- At first, we celebrated christmas in my grandma's house.
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- Now, I'm waiting to the new year!!!
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- Tomorrow is the last day of 2013 and I'll celebrate it with my family.
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- I love the countdown to the new year!!!
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- Is one of the most fantastic days of the year.
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