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My winter vacation
On this holiday, I had fun.
At first, we celebrated christmas in my grandma's house.
Now, I'm waiting to the new year!!!
Tomorrow is the last day of 2013 and I'll celebrate it with my family.
I love the countdown to the new year!!!
Is one of the most fantastic days of the year.

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标题
- My winter vacation
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- On this holiday, I had fun.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- At first, we celebrated christmas in my grandma's house.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- Now, I'm waiting to the new year!!!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Tomorrow is the last day of 2013 and I'll celebrate it with my family.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- I love the countdown to the new year!!!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- Is one of the most fantastic days of the year.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6