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I'd like to improve my english
Hi I'm new here,I'm a french girl from Reunion Island and I'm looking for people who would help me to improve my english.
I want to have foreigner friends but it's really hard to find pen pals (or I may be a little bit too shy)!
Have a nice day,bye!

Judul
- I'd like to improve my english
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Judul
Kalimat 1
- Hi I'm new here,I'm a french girl from Reunion Island and I'm looking for people who would help me to improve my english.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 1
Kalimat 2
- I want to have foreigner friends but it's really hard to find pen pals (or I may be a little bit too shy)!
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2
Kalimat 3
- Have a nice day,bye!
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3