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I'd like to improve my english
Hi I'm new here,I'm a french girl from Reunion Island and I'm looking for people who would help me to improve my english.
I want to have foreigner friends but it's really hard to find pen pals (or I may be a little bit too shy)!
Have a nice day,bye!

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- I'd like to improve my english
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문장 1
- Hi I'm new here,I'm a french girl from Reunion Island and I'm looking for people who would help me to improve my english.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I want to have foreigner friends but it's really hard to find pen pals (or I may be a little bit too shy)!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- Have a nice day,bye!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3