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Текст од Oniria - English

I'd like to improve my english
Hi I'm new here,I'm a french girl from Reunion Island and I'm looking for people who would help me to improve my english.
I want to have foreigner friends but it's really hard to find pen pals (or I may be a little bit too shy)!
Have a nice day,bye!

Наслов
- I'd like to improve my english
  Сада гласајте !
- ДОДАЈ НОВУ ИСПРАВKУ ! - Наслов
Реченица 1
- Hi I'm new here,I'm a french girl from Reunion Island and I'm looking for people who would help me to improve my english.
  Сада гласајте !
- ДОДАЈ НОВУ ИСПРАВKУ ! - Реченица 1
Реченица 2
- I want to have foreigner friends but it's really hard to find pen pals (or I may be a little bit too shy)!
  Сада гласајте !
- ДОДАЈ НОВУ ИСПРАВKУ ! - Реченица 2
Реченица 3
- Have a nice day,bye!
  Сада гласајте !
- ДОДАЈ НОВУ ИСПРАВKУ ! - Реченица 3