添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

BonjourKatyからのテキスト - English

  • Hello

  • Hello!
  • Is there someone who could help me to correct an English text ?
  • If you can you can send me a private message, the text is a bit long and I can't write it all here, I divided it in two parts but nobody answered .. Thanks !

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English