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Hello
Hello!
Is there someone who could help me to correct an English text ?
If you can you can send me a private message, the text is a bit long and I can't write it all here, I divided it in two parts but nobody answered .. Thanks !

Tittel
- Hello
  Stem nå!
- LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Tittel
Setning 1
- Hello!
  Stem nå!
- LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 1
Setning 2
- Is there someone who could help me to correct an English text ?
  Stem nå!
- LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 2
Setning 3
- If you can you can send me a private message, the text is a bit long and I can't write it all here, I divided it in two parts but nobody answered .. Thanks !
  Stem nå!
- LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 3