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Hello
Hello!
Is there someone who could help me to correct an English text ?
If you can you can send me a private message, the text is a bit long and I can't write it all here, I divided it in two parts but nobody answered .. Thanks !

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- Hello!
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- Is there someone who could help me to correct an English text ?
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- If you can you can send me a private message, the text is a bit long and I can't write it all here, I divided it in two parts but nobody answered .. Thanks !
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3