Emendata

Scriptum ab sant-spain - English

  • Correct me!

  • Zoe: She is a wealthy middle age woman, who probably likes to show off her dressmaker’s experienced hands.
  • So, what I have for her is: a black dress which is shorter in the front and decorated by a magenta and golden floral motive at the high of her hips, and also a pair of matching black heels.
  • The election of these colours it is not casual: the golden flowers stand for her ambition of money which will lead her to his death, represented by the black fabric and the red flowers.
  • As accessories she will wear a greyish pearl necklace, pearl earrings and a diamond ring; these represent the wrecks of her shrinking wealth.
  • She has a curly silvery hair and uses a natural makeup combined with a strong red lipstick.
  • The red lips here are very significant, because she will die by drinking her own poison, so again we have this colour meaning blood and death.
  • Robert Really: A professional that deals with mystery, must have an enigmatic style.
  • We want his outfit to make people rapidly understand he is a detective, so in order to achieve this, we are going to appeal to audience’s collective imaginary of what a genuine sleuth must look like.
  • He works outside, in the dark cold night, so nothing fits him better than a black gabardine and trousers which will not just keep him warm, but also will camouflage him in between night’s shadows.
  • Under the gabardine, he wears a white t-shirt and a black tie, and a shine pair of black shoes.
  • This formal style symbolise his seriousness and calculating way of thinking.
  • Accessories and props such as: a deerstalker, a wood pipe, a loupe and white gloves will relate to classic characters of the detective genre, like Sherlock Homes.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • So, what I have for her is: a black dress which is shorter in the front and decorated by a magenta and golden floral motive at the high of her hips, and also a pair of matching black heels.
      Elige nunc !
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 2ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 2
  • Sententia 3
    • The election of these colours it is not casual: the golden flowers stand for her ambition of money which will lead her to his death, represented by the black fabric and the red flowers.
      Elige nunc !
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 3ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 3
  • Sententia 4
    • As accessories she will wear a greyish pearl necklace, pearl earrings and a diamond ring; these represent the wrecks of her shrinking wealth.
      Elige nunc !
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 4ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 4
  • Sententia 5
  • Sententia 6
    • The red lips here are very significant, because she will die by drinking her own poison, so again we have this colour meaning blood and death.
      Elige nunc !
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 6ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 6
  • Sententia 7
  • Sententia 8
    • We want his outfit to make people rapidly understand he is a detective, so in order to achieve this, we are going to appeal to audience’s collective imaginary of what a genuine sleuth must look like.
      Elige nunc !
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 8ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 8
  • Sententia 9
    • He works outside, in the dark cold night, so nothing fits him better than a black gabardine and trousers which will not just keep him warm, but also will camouflage him in between night’s shadows.
      Elige nunc !
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 9ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 9
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  • Sententia 12
    • Accessories and props such as: a deerstalker, a wood pipe, a loupe and white gloves will relate to classic characters of the detective genre, like Sherlock Homes.
      Elige nunc !
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 12ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 12