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Poruka od misangocle08022004 - English

  • Please correct the story for me. Thank you very much.

  • Momma heard the door slam.
  • "Gotta wash my hands." Lindsey cried.
  • "I've got Thomas on them!" "How do you get that?" Momma asked.
  • "Teacher made me stand by Tina Thomas in chorus.
  • No one likes her, so if you accidentally touch her - even her clothes - then you've got Thomas." - Lindsay explained.
  • Soap bubbles floated away as she scrubbed her hands.
  • "Why don't you and your friends like Tina?" "Oh, cause she doesn't wear clothes like ours-hers don't even fit her good and she doesn't have stuff like we have." - Lindsay answered.
  • Lindsay said that Tina just laughed and watched Lindsay and her friends played tag.
  • No one wants to play with Tina so Lindsay didn't play with Tina.
  • But they didn't make fun of her.
  • No one said anything for a while.
  • Finally, Lindsey said, "Probably even if Tina is laughing, her heart is sad about how we treat her, huh?" "Probably." Momma said.
  • Lindsey said that she will tell Tina "I'm sorry.".
  • Momma gave Lindsey a big hug as a tear leaked down her cheek.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English