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- Momma heard the door slam.
- "Gotta wash my hands." Lindsey cried.
- "I've got Thomas on them!" "How do you get that?" Momma asked.
- "Teacher made me stand by Tina Thomas in chorus.
- No one likes her, so if you accidentally touch her - even her clothes - then you've got Thomas." - Lindsay explained.
- Soap bubbles floated away as she scrubbed her hands.
- "Why don't you and your friends like Tina?" "Oh, cause she doesn't wear clothes like ours-hers don't even fit her good and she doesn't have stuff like we have." - Lindsay answered.
- Lindsay said that Tina just laughed and watched Lindsay and her friends played tag.
- No one wants to play with Tina so Lindsay didn't play with Tina.
- But they didn't make fun of her.
- No one said anything for a while.
- Finally, Lindsey said, "Probably even if Tina is laughing, her heart is sad about how we treat her, huh?" "Probably." Momma said.
- Lindsey said that she will tell Tina "I'm sorry.".
- Momma gave Lindsey a big hug as a tear leaked down her cheek.
- misangocle08022004
November 2016
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