Korektoj

HELPU KOREKTI NUN!Ne korektita

Text from andres_rub - English

my first text here
hello!!
i'm Andrés and i want to learn this idiom.
once, i did go with my friend towards Karen's home (she's a good friend) and the moon were rare, his color were a bit red, magical moment (i love the moon)

Titolo
- my first text here
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Titolo
Frazo 1
- hello!!
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
Frazo 2
- i'm Andrés and i want to learn this idiom.
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
Frazo 3
- once, i did go with my friend towards Karen's home (she's a good friend) and the moon were rare, his color were a bit red, magical moment (i love the moon)
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3