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my first text here
hello!!
i'm Andrés and i want to learn this idiom.
once, i did go with my friend towards Karen's home (she's a good friend) and the moon were rare, his color were a bit red, magical moment (i love the moon)

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- my first text here
  투표하세요!
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문장 1
- hello!!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- i'm Andrés and i want to learn this idiom.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- once, i did go with my friend towards Karen's home (she's a good friend) and the moon were rare, his color were a bit red, magical moment (i love the moon)
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3