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從andres_rub來的文本 - English

  • my first text here

  • hello!!
  • i'm Andrés and i want to learn this idiom.
  • once, i did go with my friend towards Karen's home (she's a good friend) and the moon were rare, his color were a bit red, magical moment (i love the moon)

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