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  • Personal statement Like a international student, I want to work in the music because she in this gift to exceed the language and the culture.
  • My passion for the music follows me since my childhood, and this is why I want to postulate for your school.
  • I have at the same time the desire of to know more about it in this domain and at the same time the desire to make of my passion my job.
  • When I fell on the audio acoustics and when I saw details him courts, I said to myself that it was exactly what I wanted to make.
  • Indeed, the courts corresponded exactly to what I liked making and me want to learn it more.
  • I had the opportunity to make several internships in the field of the musiue: an internship to a proffesseur of music and an other one to a sound engineer.
  • I was so able to voice festivales, to use mixing desks and software of recordings, to repair of the electronic material ...
  • Furthermore, durand my spare time, sometimes I make up and to record by means of my computer, as well as to repair amplis.
  • Outside the high school, I study in an academy the music theory several instruments and I play in several music groups.
  • I am very interested in all which touches the sound generally, which will have affected certain of my readings.
  • I am also capable of working alone as in a group, as well as of managing a group as I already make him(it) in the music.
  • Furthermore, the fact of learns(teaches) in a self-taught way show that I am capable of working autonomous.
  • My studies in the sciences leads me to solve problems.
  • Of more the fact of mixing the studies with the music obliges me to have has good time managment and a good organization.
  • Finally, I know how to show spirit débrouillar as I made him(it) to find internships(training courses).
  • I am very exité at the idea of joining your university, and so can be a day, realize my dream: that to create my own instrument

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    • Personal statement Like a international student, I want to work in the music because she in this gift to exceed the language and the culture.
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    • I have at the same time the desire of to know more about it in this domain and at the same time the desire to make of my passion my job.
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    • When I fell on the audio acoustics and when I saw details him courts, I said to myself that it was exactly what I wanted to make.
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    • I had the opportunity to make several internships in the field of the musiue: an internship to a proffesseur of music and an other one to a sound engineer.
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    • I was so able to voice festivales, to use mixing desks and software of recordings, to repair of the electronic material ...
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    • Furthermore, durand my spare time, sometimes I make up and to record by means of my computer, as well as to repair amplis.
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    • Outside the high school, I study in an academy the music theory several instruments and I play in several music groups.
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    • I am also capable of working alone as in a group, as well as of managing a group as I already make him(it) in the music.
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    • Of more the fact of mixing the studies with the music obliges me to have has good time managment and a good organization.
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    • I am very exité at the idea of joining your university, and so can be a day, realize my dream: that to create my own instrument
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