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  • Personal Statement

  • Personal statement Like a international student, I want to work in the music because she in this gift to exceed the language and the culture.
  • My passion for the music follows me since my childhood, and this is why I want to postulate for your school.
  • I have at the same time the desire of to know more about it in this domain and at the same time the desire to make of my passion my job.
  • When I fell on the audio acoustics and when I saw details him courts, I said to myself that it was exactly what I wanted to make.
  • Indeed, the courts corresponded exactly to what I liked making and me want to learn it more.
  • I had the opportunity to make several internships in the field of the musiue: an internship to a proffesseur of music and an other one to a sound engineer.
  • I was so able to voice festivales, to use mixing desks and software of recordings, to repair of the electronic material ...
  • Furthermore, durand my spare time, sometimes I make up and to record by means of my computer, as well as to repair amplis.
  • Outside the high school, I study in an academy the music theory several instruments and I play in several music groups.
  • I am very interested in all which touches the sound generally, which will have affected certain of my readings.
  • I am also capable of working alone as in a group, as well as of managing a group as I already make him(it) in the music.
  • Furthermore, the fact of learns(teaches) in a self-taught way show that I am capable of working autonomous.
  • My studies in the sciences leads me to solve problems.
  • Of more the fact of mixing the studies with the music obliges me to have has good time managment and a good organization.
  • Finally, I know how to show spirit débrouillar as I made him(it) to find internships(training courses).
  • I am very exité at the idea of joining your university, and so can be a day, realize my dream: that to create my own instrument

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • Personal statement Like a international student, I want to work in the music because she in this gift to exceed the language and the culture.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • My passion for the music follows me since my childhood, and this is why I want to postulate for your school.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • I have at the same time the desire of to know more about it in this domain and at the same time the desire to make of my passion my job.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • When I fell on the audio acoustics and when I saw details him courts, I said to myself that it was exactly what I wanted to make.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
  • câu 6
    • I had the opportunity to make several internships in the field of the musiue: an internship to a proffesseur of music and an other one to a sound engineer.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • I was so able to voice festivales, to use mixing desks and software of recordings, to repair of the electronic material ...
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • Furthermore, durand my spare time, sometimes I make up and to record by means of my computer, as well as to repair amplis.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • Outside the high school, I study in an academy the music theory several instruments and I play in several music groups.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
  • câu 10
    • I am very interested in all which touches the sound generally, which will have affected certain of my readings.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10
  • câu 11
    • I am also capable of working alone as in a group, as well as of managing a group as I already make him(it) in the music.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11
  • câu 12
    • Furthermore, the fact of learns(teaches) in a self-taught way show that I am capable of working autonomous.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
  • câu 13
  • câu 14
    • Of more the fact of mixing the studies with the music obliges me to have has good time managment and a good organization.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14
  • câu 15
  • câu 16
    • I am very exité at the idea of joining your university, and so can be a day, realize my dream: that to create my own instrument
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16