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  • Personal Statement

  • Personal statement Like a international student, I want to work in the music because she in this gift to exceed the language and the culture.
  • My passion for the music follows me since my childhood, and this is why I want to postulate for your school.
  • I have at the same time the desire of to know more about it in this domain and at the same time the desire to make of my passion my job.
  • When I fell on the audio acoustics and when I saw details him courts, I said to myself that it was exactly what I wanted to make.
  • Indeed, the courts corresponded exactly to what I liked making and me want to learn it more.
  • I had the opportunity to make several internships in the field of the musiue: an internship to a proffesseur of music and an other one to a sound engineer.
  • I was so able to voice festivales, to use mixing desks and software of recordings, to repair of the electronic material ...
  • Furthermore, durand my spare time, sometimes I make up and to record by means of my computer, as well as to repair amplis.
  • Outside the high school, I study in an academy the music theory several instruments and I play in several music groups.
  • I am very interested in all which touches the sound generally, which will have affected certain of my readings.
  • I am also capable of working alone as in a group, as well as of managing a group as I already make him(it) in the music.
  • Furthermore, the fact of learns(teaches) in a self-taught way show that I am capable of working autonomous.
  • My studies in the sciences leads me to solve problems.
  • Of more the fact of mixing the studies with the music obliges me to have has good time managment and a good organization.
  • Finally, I know how to show spirit débrouillar as I made him(it) to find internships(training courses).
  • I am very exité at the idea of joining your university, and so can be a day, realize my dream: that to create my own instrument

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    • Personal statement Like a international student, I want to work in the music because she in this gift to exceed the language and the culture.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 1PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 1
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    • My passion for the music follows me since my childhood, and this is why I want to postulate for your school.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 2PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 2
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    • I have at the same time the desire of to know more about it in this domain and at the same time the desire to make of my passion my job.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 3PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 3
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    • When I fell on the audio acoustics and when I saw details him courts, I said to myself that it was exactly what I wanted to make.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 4PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 4
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    • I had the opportunity to make several internships in the field of the musiue: an internship to a proffesseur of music and an other one to a sound engineer.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 6PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 6
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    • I was so able to voice festivales, to use mixing desks and software of recordings, to repair of the electronic material ...
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 7PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 7
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    • Furthermore, durand my spare time, sometimes I make up and to record by means of my computer, as well as to repair amplis.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 8PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 8
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    • Outside the high school, I study in an academy the music theory several instruments and I play in several music groups.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 9PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 9
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    • I am also capable of working alone as in a group, as well as of managing a group as I already make him(it) in the music.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 11PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 11
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    • Of more the fact of mixing the studies with the music obliges me to have has good time managment and a good organization.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 14PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 14
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    • I am very exité at the idea of joining your university, and so can be a day, realize my dream: that to create my own instrument
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 16PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 16