Corrections

עזור לתקן שגיאות עכשיו!לא מתוקן

טקסט של - English

  • Please help me to correct this story. Thank you so much.

  • One day, a rabbit went fishing next to a river but he couldn’t catch any fish.
  • The second day, he kept fishing and the result didn’t change.
  • The third day, when he sat next to the river, one big fish jumped up from the river and said: “If you keep using carrots to do food for fish, I’ll eat you”.
  • The lesson from this story: Everything you gave were all things you wanted to give, sometimes they aren’t the things those an other wanted.
  • So sometimes all things you gave didn’t have any price in eyes of other people.
  • Let's consider other people know to value your life more meaning.

בבקשה, עזור לתקן כל משפט! - English