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Please help me to correct this story. Thank you so much.
One day, a rabbit went fishing next to a river but he couldn’t catch any fish.
The second day, he kept fishing and the result didn’t change.
The third day, when he sat next to the river, one big fish jumped up from the river and said: “If you keep using carrots to do food for fish, I’ll eat you”.
The lesson from this story: Everything you gave were all things you wanted to give, sometimes they aren’t the things those an other wanted.
So sometimes all things you gave didn’t have any price in eyes of other people.
Let's consider other people know to value your life more meaning.

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- Please help me to correct this story. Thank you so much.
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문장 1
- One day, a rabbit went fishing next to a river but he couldn’t catch any fish.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- The second day, he kept fishing and the result didn’t change.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- The third day, when he sat next to the river, one big fish jumped up from the river and said: “If you keep using carrots to do food for fish, I’ll eat you”.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- The lesson from this story: Everything you gave were all things you wanted to give, sometimes they aren’t the things those an other wanted.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- So sometimes all things you gave didn’t have any price in eyes of other people.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- Let's consider other people know to value your life more meaning.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6