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Please help me to correct this story. Thank you so much.
One day, a rabbit went fishing next to a river but he couldn’t catch any fish.
The second day, he kept fishing and the result didn’t change.
The third day, when he sat next to the river, one big fish jumped up from the river and said: “If you keep using carrots to do food for fish, I’ll eat you”.
The lesson from this story: Everything you gave were all things you wanted to give, sometimes they aren’t the things those an other wanted.
So sometimes all things you gave didn’t have any price in eyes of other people.
Let's consider other people know to value your life more meaning.

Cím
- Please help me to correct this story. Thank you so much.
  Szavazz most!
- ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Cím
Mondat 1
- One day, a rabbit went fishing next to a river but he couldn’t catch any fish.
  Szavazz most!
- ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 1
Mondat 2
- The second day, he kept fishing and the result didn’t change.
  Szavazz most!
- ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 2
Mondat 3
- The third day, when he sat next to the river, one big fish jumped up from the river and said: “If you keep using carrots to do food for fish, I’ll eat you”.
  Szavazz most!
- ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 3
Mondat 4
- The lesson from this story: Everything you gave were all things you wanted to give, sometimes they aren’t the things those an other wanted.
  Szavazz most!
- ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 4
Mondat 5
- So sometimes all things you gave didn’t have any price in eyes of other people.
  Szavazz most!
- ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 5
Mondat 6
- Let's consider other people know to value your life more meaning.
  Szavazz most!
- ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 6